Friday 7 June 2013

Maud: A Monodrama

Just found this today and while I'm not usually a huge fan of Tennyson, I really like it. Good poetry should inspire the senses. Humor me, and read this. . . think of what it makes you see, hear, touch, smell, and feel. 

Maud; A Monodrama (from Part I)

BY ALFRED, LORD TENNYSON
   Come into the garden, Maud,
      For the black bat, night, has flown,
Come into the garden, Maud,
      I am here at the gate alone;


And the woodbine spices are wafted abroad,
      And the musk of the rose is blown.


   For a breeze of morning moves,
      And the planet of Love is on high,
Beginning to faint in the light that she loves
      In a bed of daffodil sky,
To faint in the light of the sun she loves,
      To faint in his light, and to die.


   All night have the roses heard
      The flute, violin, bassoon;
All night has the casement jessamine stirr'd
      To the dancers dancing in tune;
Till a silence fell with the waking bird,
      And a hush with the setting moon.


   I said to the lily, "There is but one
      With whom she has heart to be gay.
When will the dancers leave her alone?
      She is weary of dance and play."
Now half to the setting moon are gone,
      And half to the rising day;
Low on the sand and loud on the stone
      The last wheel echoes away.


   I said to the rose, "The brief night goes
      In babble and revel and wine.
O young lord-lover, what sighs are those,
      For one that will never be thine?
But mine, but mine," so I sware to the rose,
      "For ever and ever, mine."


   And the soul of the rose went into my blood,
      As the music clash'd in the hall;
And long by the garden lake I stood,
      For I heard your rivulet fall
From the lake to the meadow and on to the wood,
      Our wood, that is dearer than all;


   From the meadow your walks have left so sweet
      That whenever a March-wind sighs
He sets the jewel-print of your feet
      In violets blue as your eyes,
To the woody hollows in which we meet
      And the valleys of Paradise.


   The slender acacia would not shake
      One long milk-bloom on the tree;
The white lake-blossom fell into the lake
      As the pimpernel dozed on the lea;
But the rose was awake all night for your sake,
      Knowing your promise to me;
The lilies and roses were all awake,
      They sigh'd for the dawn and thee.


   Queen rose of the rosebud garden of girls,
      Come hither, the dances are done,
In gloss of satin and glimmer of pearls,
      Queen lily and rose in one;
Shine out, little head, sunning over with curls,
      To the flowers, and be their sun.


   There has fallen a splendid tear
      From the passion-flower at the gate.
She is coming, my dove, my dear;
      She is coming, my life, my fate;
The red rose cries, "She is near, she is near;"
      And the white rose weeps, "She is late;"
The larkspur listens, "I hear, I hear;"
      And the lily whispers, "I wait."


   She is coming, my own, my sweet;
      Were it ever so airy a tread,
My heart would hear her and beat,
      Were it earth in an earthy bed;
My dust would hear her and beat,
      Had I lain for a century dead,
Would start and tremble under her feet,
      And blossom in purple and red.

For me, here are the senses inspired:

Sight:
                                  





Smell: The smell of dew on grass in the morning, fresh and clear.
Sound: Crickets, the occasional chirp of a bird. Like a chickadee --dunno why that has to be the bird.
Touch: A cool breeze on my cheeks, wet dew soaking into my feet.
Taste: A taste of wine from last nights revelry, sweet but sour.
Feeling: Bittersweet melancholy (but isn't that the norm with Tennyson?)

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